Check out my Web Site

Hi everyone. I am currently taking a web site design class at the local college. I would appriciate it if some of you could check it out and give me some feed back as it is my first attempt at web site design. The site will only be on line temporarly. [url=http://www.mysticmanagement.com/student32:3186e]www.mysticmanagement.com/student32[/url:3186e]

thanks


Born to fish forced to work.
Alan

[This message has been edited by fish4trout (edited 04 March 2006).]

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Got a “server could not be found” pop up.

Sorry Alan, … 'ya must have a typo in the URL somewhere

Keep at it though!


Christopher Chin, Jonquiere Quebec
[url=http://www.flyanglersonline.com/bb/Forum1/HTML/015738.html:d036a]2006 FishIn Ste-Marguerite River[/url:d036a]

[url=http://pages.videotron.com/fcch/:d036a]Fishing the Ste-Marguerite[/url:d036a]

thats weird? When I click on the link above it comes right up


Born to fish forced to work.
Alan

Needs a forward slash, not a backslash, on most platforms. Try this one [http://www.mysticmanagement.com/student32[/url:c5e04]

Cheers,
Hans W


=== You have a friend in Low Places ===
[url=“http://www.danica.com/flytier”]http://www.danica.com/flytier](http://www.mysticmanagement.com/student32:c5e04)

ALAN,

1ST WEB SITE? Very nice. Well thought out and well put together. Stay with it.

Alan, … got it. Nice … Like that you didn’t go over board.

Some sites look like a disco on acid


Christopher Chin, Jonquiere Quebec
[url=http://www.flyanglersonline.com/bb/Forum1/HTML/015738.html:19bd7]2006 FishIn Ste-Marguerite River[/url:19bd7]

[url=http://pages.videotron.com/fcch/:19bd7]Fishing the Ste-Marguerite[/url:19bd7]

Alan, hi. I’m a college professor of psychology but part of what I do is teach students how to build websites (a few students once in a while). Here’s a quick, constructive response to your first page:

First of all, it’s great. The color scheme of the white,burgundy,green goes well with the fishing theme and your photo is well-placed, well-sized, and just right. Your font choice is great.

What I would change: Break up that large paragraph below the photo into two - four smaller paragraphs separated by a line break and place them in a table that limits the width to a bit less wide than the photo.

The color behind the left hand menu isn’t fantastic. I’d consider using the green of your header and making the links be the burgundy or black.

Excellent work… have fun with it!

I hope this helps.

Diane

Got right on from your thread here, very nice job, and good reading on the river text. I know Diane is the professor, but I would choose one size larger on the font. Of course I can get stronger glasses too. Again, very nice and informative. Jonezee


I learn more about the world while talking to myself when fishing alone

Great looking site Alan. I know squat about building a website but I might suggest you go through your introduction for punctuation and spelling. Spell check won’t won’t catch it if it’s spelled right. Might be a run on sentence in there somewhere, too.

I’m impressed - best of luck.

(What are the odds you stumble into a professor that teaches website design? I love this place.)

I too got it right off the bat. Good Lookin’ (the site, drift boat and water weren’t bad either LOL)


she who dies with the most toy’s wins.

JC, … Lookin’ for part time help


Christopher Chin, Jonquiere Quebec
[url=http://www.flyanglersonline.com/bb/Forum1/HTML/015738.html:457fb]2006 FishIn Ste-Marguerite River[/url:457fb]

[url=http://pages.videotron.com/fcch/:457fb]Fishing the Ste-Marguerite[/url:457fb]

Looks good!


There’s almost nothin’ wrong with the first lie, it’s the weight of all the others holdin’ it up that gets ya’! - Tim

Made me want to explore it. How would the different sections of the Sac be to pontoon through? Any nasties? Put-ins and take-outs sound fairly straightforeward.

I too was cursed with the ability to immediately spot misspelled words, and punctuation. There are a couple of small errors there that you might want to correct before the professor sees them. Hang tough! You’re almost there! Good site!


Lew

I would like to thank everybody for taking the time to check out my site and give me suggestions, I really appriciate it. If your ever around Redding and need some info or want to fish just hit me up.


Born to fish forced to work.
Alan

boring but workable