the only thing that i think he needs to work on his the head of his salmon steelhead flies. they are a wee bit raggedy. i think a nice tapered head on the salmon/steelhead flies would make them perfectly awsome. but then again, he is a beginner, and i had the same probolom of making a head. I hope he can come on to the chat room sometime....(now i am not gonna be like... the youngest person on here)