I think they look good and should catch fish. The only thing I will throw out is that when I look close at the pictures it looks like you may have wrapped your wire in the same direction as the body. When wrapping a wire rib you need to remember to counter wrap it so that it will provide protection for the herl body by going across the body material. Just trying to be helpful...Keep at tying and enjoy it. I know that I love tying...
Warren
Fly fishing and fly tying are two things that I do, and when I am doing them, they are the only 2 things I think about. They clear my mind.