I got back to the vice last night. I tried going with a bigger hook (#6) and tying in the deer hair extension farther back. The body is dubbed with chopped craft fur. I liked Borger's wing so I appropriated it. The grizzly hackle is wound on a reinforced monofilament post that was cut off after tying.
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I also found that I had everything necessary to tie a disco damsel in the house so I tried one. I think either of these last two flies will work. The abdomen on the disco damsel may be a little too thin but I can adjust that.
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